2011年3月2日 星期三
A Dream I Have Had
A dream I have had was ridiculous. In my dream, I was an employee who worked in a small company. My only hope was to become a millionaire. One day, when I was on my way to work, there was a strange person who gave me a package. I opened it and found one million inside. From that moment, I became a rich man. Then I went to my workplace and shouted at my boss " I quit." I started to travel around the world and bought many stuffs that I didn't need. I spend money as running water. As a result, my money ran off and I became poorer than before. I begged for food on the street but nobody hand out their hands to me. At he end, I died in a lonely death on the cold street. Then, I woke up. It was such a terrible dream that I wish it would never happen in my life.
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救助是hand out one's hands嗎??
回覆刪除有這個用法喔??
還有呀!!
是at "the" end
你打錯了!!
p.s.不用客氣了
1.~nobody hand out their hands to me.
回覆刪除hand 要加上ed變成handed唷~
2.At he end, → 是at the end 啦~
是at the end 哦=ˇ=
回覆刪除第8段的spend應該變spent唷!
回覆刪除第五行可以改成found that there were one million inside 好像會比較順吧!!
回覆刪除我也是看到最後那個at he end...
回覆刪除rich man 應該改成 rich woman吧..除非妳是男的= =
回覆刪除the少了個t
回覆刪除應該是handed
最後的I wish要改過去式.....吧XD
回覆刪除running water 可不可以用river 比較好 不太確定
回覆刪除At he end如上
倒數第五行 ran off 逃跑,流掉,印出
回覆刪除ran out 用完,耗盡,期滿,跑出