2011年3月14日 星期一
An Unforgettable Trip
As a person who like to travel and learn other countries' culture. Korea is a wonderful place that you must have to go. The first time I went to Korea was at the age of twelve. I still remembered that when I arrived there, I was so excited. I went to visit a lot of spots of historic and learned cultural about Korean history. People lived there were so gently and friendly because they always smiled to foreigners no matter where I went. When I was buying some local food at local markets, some venders even gave me food for free. As the proverb goes, "When in Rome, do as the Romans do." Therefore, I put on the Korean traditional clothes. In fact, it made me feel that I was a real Korean. By virtue of this trip, I find that Korea is really a beautiful country and I will never forget about it.
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第一行like要加s
回覆刪除第一句就這樣結束,是不是怪怪的阿!?
gently是Adv.
spots of historic應該直接寫historic spots就好了吧
回覆刪除最後一句怎麼忽然用現在式...?
文章題材很好~~:D
As a person who like to travel~like要加s喔
回覆刪除Korea is a wonderful place that you must have to go.那個 must 跟have to是不是留一個就好了?還是你這樣算是強調0.0??
People lived there were so gently and friendly because they always smiled to foreigners no matter where I went.這句感覺怪怪的,你要不要把那個no matter後面那邊都刪掉
第一行是likes
回覆刪除a wonderful place that you must have to go
應該是you must have to go to吧
smiled to 介係詞是否改成at比較好?
回覆刪除1.第一行的like要加s,我覺得第一句As~那句跟Korea~to go.可以變成一句,感覺會比較完整...
回覆刪除2.第四行的 visit a lot of spots of historic改成visit a lot of historic spots才對喲!因為historic是形容詞~
3. 第四行~and learned cultural about Korean history.你是要打culture嗎?
4.gently (adv.)→gentle (adj.)
I went to visit a lot of spots of historic and learned cultural about Korean history. 的cultural要用名詞culture~
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