2011年4月6日 星期三

Describing a Process-(4)-How to plan a party

 Everyone likes to attent a party.  But, do you know how to plan an excellent party?  In fact, it is easy to plan a party. First, you have to think about your party's theme and start to find a good place that suitable for your subject. Second, you need some people who are good at cooking to help you make delicious food and soft drink. Third, find ten people or so to help you decorate the place. I think you can ask your friends or siblings for help and maybe they will help without requesting for any salary! Forth, select the party's time. I think that the most wonderful time is on Saturday night because most poeple don't have to go to school or work on that day and the next day. Last and most important thing is send your greet cards to all your friends and start to look forward to the party's day coming. Following these tips, I think hold a party will never be a difficulty for you!

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  2. 第一句的動詞"attent"應該是"attend"唷~
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    倒數第二句一開始那邊好像怪怪...
    把"the party's day coming"
    改成"the coming of the party"
    會不會比較好???
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    看完眼睛都花了:")))

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  3. ~good place that suitable ~ 那個蘇特播要不要加s?
    ~thing is send your~ 那個send前面要不要加個to?
    ~forward to the party's day coming~ 要不要改成the coming of the party感覺比較有聽過這樣子寫ㄏㄏ
    然後你的字難懂*100!!!!!

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  4. suitible前面是要加be動詞吧!!!
    其實我比較喜歡suitable後面加to,可以for也可以拉XDD
    then,你寫好多,可是都有寫到重點~~讚拉!!

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  5. Last and most important thing
    那個and要不要改成but比較好...?
    the party's day coming 有點不太順耶~
    最後一句follownig前面要不要加個By? XD
    其他好棒!!!

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  6. First, you have to think about your party's theme and start to find a good place that suitable for your subject. suitable前少動詞
    其他都ok,你還把比較細節的部分寫出來,Good!

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  7. 第六行 Forth, select the party's time. 有點中文式英文~如果改成select the appropriate time to hold the party.你參考看看八~

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  8. greet cards 是不是greeting cards比較好

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