I would like to buy a lady hoodie, so I take two pieces of advertisment from LOURIE'S and GREEN'S and start to campare their price. I find there are a lot of correspondences between two stores. First, I find they are made from cotton blend which is my favorite material and they can be washed by washing machine. Second, they are suitable for those whose size is from 4-14. Luckily, my size is 10. Third, they have many color for customers to choose such as red, navy, white, green that bother me which one should I select. Above all, these two hoodies in different stores are in the same price! They are all $34.99! I really don't know which one should I choose.
color可數唷!
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文章很通順呢~看了很舒服
campare--改compare
回覆刪除我發現你都沒有用到講義P143的句型喔!!
many color 要加s
回覆刪除其他也沒問題了
寫的好像妳真的要買!!Good
color要加s哦!
回覆刪除通順通順~~~
回覆刪除compare才對
回覆刪除是at the same price
which I should select/choose我不確定對不對,再問金龍看看八!
有加情境,感覺不錯!
第六行such as前+個逗號吧然後green前應該要有and~
回覆刪除我覺得寫的很流暢很好
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