I am going to graduate from university next month. Before the coming graduation ceremony, I made a decision that I’m going to accept a job. There are several reasons why I want to accept a job. First, if I have a good job , I can give some money to my parents to appreciate that they had raised me for twenty-three years. Second, I can save the money and hope I could buy a house for myself before the age of thirty. Third, it's a good chance for me to bring my specialty that I learned from the college. Due to all of these reasons, I decided to accept the job from that company and hope I could achieve my goals.
時態有點錯亂唷!
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Third, it's a good chance for me to bring my specialty that I learned from the college. (是我誤會你的意思還是怎樣，我是想說，bring your specialty怎麼之後就沒有了，你應該會說to 哪裡吧!!)
回覆刪除*~ they had raised me for twenty-three years.→ have raised。
回覆刪除* I can save the money and hope I could buy ~→I can save the money and "I" hope I "can" buy~
*Due to all of these reasons, I decided to accept the job from that company and "I" hope I could achieve my goals.可是我發現這句and連接兩個不同時態的句子耶~
*注意一下全文的時態!
時態感覺稍稍混亂了點
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